Sorry about that But I used literal translation since I can't for the life of me figure out a better way to say it in english
Your translation is already much better than the MTL I had a hard time following a while back. Thank you very much!
What this series really needs, is a map or list of the territories and their schools, and of the factions in each territory.
I also saw it in the original that they say the same person or beast's name different ways or only called them by their title, depending on the chapter, so thank you for their name in parentheses when they do that.