I Shaved. Then I Brought a High School Girl Home.

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Yeah, yeah, hur dur repeat of "where is the 14 coming from" but seriously, where the hell was that figured pulled from? I'm pretty sure a "high school" student in Japan isn't 14, 15 maybe, (and even then they'd soon to be 16 by that point) but definitely not 14. She's 17 in the story.
 
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May I know when is the continuation of this? I read it because I got interested in the trailer of the anime. And now ch 26 feels like I want to read more. Is the manga still updating since it's been 2 weeks
 
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@Vookan

Has a good bit of story, but is amazing; A demon lord's tale: https://mangadex.org/title/26297/maou-ni-natta-node-dungeon-tsukutte-jingai-musume-to-honobono-suru

Similar story but with a teacher, Sensei Time Leap: https://mangadex.org/title/35817/kou-2-ni-time-leaped-shita-ore-ga-touji-suki-datta-sensei-ni-kokutta-kekka

Retired Adventurer who killed a dragon; A Ranked Adventurer Slow Life: https://mangadex.org/title/35871/a-rank-boukensha-no-slow-life

Young Knight Falls for his Stoic Boss:
https://mangadex.org/title/43529/toshiue-elite-onna-kishi-ga-boku-no-mae-de-dake-kawaii

Chad goes after boss in, I want to Marry the Demon Queen: https://mangadex.org/title/28892/maou-sama-to-kekkon-shitai

In smut we have, My new Snow Woman Wife is Half Loli: https://mangadex.org/title/55864/yuki-no-niiduma-wa-boku-to-tokeaitai


Sorry if the jokes weren't to your taste.
 
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I may have missed it but when did he actually shave? Chapter 1 was just the rejection and then chance encounter. When did the shaving happen?
 

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The comment section of this manga is all the proof you need that bitchslapping certain people every now and than should just not be allowed, but actively encouraged.
 
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It's not terrible but the drama writing is really bad at times. The author also feels the need to introduce a new character and forget the old ones every time an arc ends. Woman confessed to you and is now sharing your secret? Nah, we've got a playboy dude to focus on now. Guy tried to rape ya? Nah, he's just your coworker who you casually converse with now, let's see this new harem woman instead...

If you want something similar (and in my opinion, better) give One Room of Happiness a shot.
 
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Oof, I was so glad to see this show up again after being dead for a year, but... MAN. That typesetting was painful, and extremely obvious in numerous spots that this was not done by a native English speaker. Still... more than I could get from the Japanese, so that's something.

A few constructive tips:
  1. DON'T USE ALL CAPS. IT'S SHOUTING AND HARD TO READ.
  2. Don't hyphenate so much (nearly every line!). Change your font size by a px or move to the next line.
  3. When you do have to hyphenate, it should only be done on syllable boundaries. Hyphens can't just be placed anywhere.
  4. If you're putting text over a black or busy background, you need more separation than a pixel or two or it's unreadable.
So... more readable than Japanese. Just barely.
 
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New chapter. Better hyphenation. But the font choice for internal thoughts was nigh-unreadable, spelling mistakes abound, multiple pages weren't even level-corrected, and the translation was REALLY rough to the point of being impossible to understand. Just using names constantly and not substituting first/third person pronouns when they make sense make it much harder to tell who is actually speaking/thinking.

Again... I can eventually read it, which is more than I could do in Japanese, but it makes me wonder sometimes if I'd do better using Google Lens on top of the Japanese raws.
 
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Mochi Scans, please reconsider. The people who released that chapter yesterday have no idea what they're doing.
 

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