I Won't Touch You Anymore - Ch. 45

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Page 7 has an extra word in panel 1. "So you won't don't have to be alone" Should be "won't" or "don't", not both.

Page 8 has two words around the wrong way. "I wonder if I'm doing really" should be "really doing".
 

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