I Work Nine to Five in the Immortal Cultivation World - Ch. 1

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While this almost works, there is the fact that he just needed one more strike... but this shows that he's a dumbass...
 
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Yeah the forced plot of “It’s 5pm so I’m done,” and then the character he let get away causes trouble down the line. It’s suuuper hilarious 🙄 Worse is the continual usage of forced plot making it not worth the read. Missing a comedy tag.
 

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