IDOL×IDOL STORY! - Vol. 3 Ch. 15 - Black Stars A: Team Karin

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Thank you for the update. Now let me criticize the plot a bit.

All the build up that Karin is a hard ass making the relationships in her group sour af just for them to come in in this chapter and say: Nah uh, she is actually a pretty badass leader that made friends with her teammates. I don't know if you would consider a plot twist, I call it plain simple contradicting yourself.
 
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Thank you for the update. Now let me criticize the plot a bit.

All the build up that Karin is a hard ass making the relationships in her group sour af just for them to come in in this chapter and say: Nah uh, she is actually a pretty badass leader that made friends with her teammates. I don't know if you would consider a plot twist, I call it plain simple contradicting yourself.
Yeah, it feels like that character development happened off-screen, which isn’t great.

Also, I don’t get how one of the dancers not “matching energy” with the others would result in a collision.
 

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