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Welp at least local bullying is being stopped can't do it all Aizawa but you sure are trying.
"If you're being bullied just make a show of yourself and kamikaze your bullies' and your reputation since you're about to kys anyway! Might as well do some damage!"
Oddly enough even though this particular story is so niche, it could've benefited from a longer middle. All the monolgues took like a page at most some even only lasting a few panels. It's show don't tell works sure but the whole point is that a normal person won't understand the desperation of the bullied. The weight of the situation felt unrealistically short as messed up as that sounds. There weren't enough details emotions-wise or maybe I'm just spoiled with 3-gatsu no lion and a silent voice solid 7/10 (the art is a 10/10 though some good eyes there at least)
There is no winner to these things in the end. Glad it at least said that even if it didn't show it with the ending.
"If you're being bullied just make a show of yourself and kamikaze your bullies' and your reputation since you're about to kys anyway! Might as well do some damage!"
Oddly enough even though this particular story is so niche, it could've benefited from a longer middle. All the monolgues took like a page at most some even only lasting a few panels. It's show don't tell works sure but the whole point is that a normal person won't understand the desperation of the bullied. The weight of the situation felt unrealistically short as messed up as that sounds. There weren't enough details emotions-wise or maybe I'm just spoiled with 3-gatsu no lion and a silent voice solid 7/10 (the art is a 10/10 though some good eyes there at least)
There is no winner to these things in the end. Glad it at least said that even if it didn't show it with the ending.
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