Ikari Shinji no Himegoto. - Vol. 1 Ch. 12

[MangaDex]

 

[Hikineet]

Thanks for the chapter.

 

[tokichiroaoi]

Thank you for the release! Keep it up!

 

[MarqFJA87]

@Jobrothethird: Some minor corrections, since IIRC you're largely MTLing this from SEA and English isn't your first language.

page 3: While 子's most straightforward translation is "child", it's also often used in the "teenager" sense of "boy" or "girl", so in the context of this chapter's dialogue, it should be translated as "boy", or "kid" if gender neutrality due to Shinji's crossdressing is that important; "child" comes across as awkwardly formal and is too associated with "prepubescent".

page 4:

• 2nd panel: "her" should be "his", since they know Shinji is male and he's just crossdressing rather than identifying as transgender.
• last panel: "whose" should be "who's".

 

[Jobrothethird]

@Jobrothethird: Some minor corrections, since IIRC you're largely MTLing this from SEA and English isn't your first language.

page 3: While 子's most straightforward translation is "child", it's also often used in the "teenager" sense of "boy" or "girl", so in the context of this chapter's dialogue, it should be translated as "boy", or "kid" if gender neutrality due to Shinji's crossdressing is that important; "child" comes across as awkwardly formal and is too associated with "prepubescent".

page 4:

• 2nd panel: "her" should be "his", since they know Shinji is male and he's just crossdressing rather than identifying as transgender.
• last panel: "whose" should be "who's".

Thanks so much for catching those mistakes. I fixed them. If my English teacher saw how bad my grammar was, she would probs kill me, lol.

 

[MarqFJA87]

Thanks so much for catching those mistakes. I fixed them. If my English teacher saw how bad my grammar was, she would probs kill me, lol.

Uh, I still see several instances of "child" on page 3... and finally noticed that you misspelled "and" as "ad" in the 4th panel.