I’m a Villain, but I Saved the Female Lead - Ch. 1

[MangaDex]

 

[Oeconomist]

The editor should have grabbed the writer by the nose with as much force as he could manage, and then have explained that, when next the author dragged-out a chapter by having the characters communicate poorly, the editor would likewisse grab the author's nose, and then slap him with as much force as the editor could manage.

 

[jhs_reika]

Thank you for the translation.
The editing already made the result MUCH better than Manjanoon English's (it's not that hard to "translate" better than them) but looking at the grammar I guess siopaw isn't a native? And there're still some mistakes in translation. For example: "Isn't it noisy?" ("Isn't she noisy?" or "Aren't you noisy?" would be more correct because MC was talking about her human maid) and "...she may not be the heroine of this novel." (obviously wrong because MC knew that Yvonne IS the heroine).

The editor should have grabbed the writer by the nose with as much force as he could manage, and then have explained that, when next the author dragged-out a chapter by having the characters communicate poorly, the editor would likewisse grab the authors nose, and then slap him with as much force as the editor could manage.

Wow. But what if the editor was the one who actually asked the writer to drag out the chapter?

 

[Oeconomist]

what if the editor was the one who actually asked the writer to drag out the chapter?

Then all hope is lost. Still, it would be cool if a writer who had prostituted himself was literally beaten for doing so by his pimp.

 

[siopaw]

Thank you for the translation.
The editing already made the result MUCH better than Manjanoon English's (it's not that hard to "translate" better than them) but looking at the grammar I guess siopaw isn't a native? And there're still some mistakes in translation. For example: "Isn't it noisy?" ("Isn't she noisy?" or "Aren't you noisy?" would be more correct because MC was talking about her human maid) and "...she may not be the heroine of this novel." (obviously wrong because MC knew that Yvonne IS the heroine).


Wow. But what if the editor was the one who actually asked the writer to drag out the chapter?

Thanks for the input! To answer your second point, MC actually said that perhaps Yvonne isnt the female lead in this timeline because if she were, she wouldn't be there because she'd be living her happy ever after. At least that's how the raws have it. I may be wrong of course.

In the first tl by manjoon, it said "I'm not the heroine of this story," which actually doesnt make sense for her to say because from the start, she already knew she reincarated as the villainess. The raw says "Not the heroine of this story..." with no clear object, so I assumed that it's the OG FL.

As for the "Isn't it noisy," tl, while it was her maid that was noisy, MC was talking to herself and saying it was just noisy in general, kinda like saying "it's noisy in here." though maybe changing it would be okay too.

 

[jhs_reika]

Thanks for the input! To answer your second point, MC actually said that perhaps Yvonne isnt the female lead in this timeline because if she were, she wouldn't be there because she'd be living her happy ever after. At least that's how the raws have it. I may be wrong of course.

In the first tl by manjoon, it said "I'm not the heroine of this story," which actually doesnt make sense for her to say because from the start, she already knew she reincarated as the villainess. The raw says "Not the heroine of this story..." with no clear object, so I assumed that it's the OG FL.

This is just my assumption, but maybe she said something like "...isn't she the heroine of this novel?"

 

[siopaw]

This is just my assumption, but maybe she said something like "...isn't she the heroine of this novel?"

Hmm, you're right. Thanks for pointing it out

 

[Dwarfy2k]

What a weird first chapter, I just dont get the plot progression here? Just sounds like prince was always a bad redflag and he was the MC of the OG story