I'm a Villain, but I Saved the Female Lead - Ch. 5

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Yeah, the author is kind of all over the place when doing anything other than just two people talking. Like when the FMC got attacked; where did the monster come from? Where was the impact on her hand? Where was the MMC realising there was a monster? Where was his attack on the monster?

She just says ouch and then suddenly there's a sword in the monster that's now already dead. It's very jarring.
 
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Yeah, the author is kind of all over the place when doing anything other than just two people talking. Like when the FMC got attacked; where did the monster come from? Where was the impact on her hand? Where was the MMC realising there was a monster? Where was his attack on the monster?

She just says ouch and then suddenly there's a sword in the monster that's now already dead. It's very jarring.
The artist was clearly bad with dynamic scenes.
Unfortunately, I think this manhwa has many actions.

And have they actually Paired already for her damage to already get transferred to Kyle?
 
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Wait, why are you going to the imperial library yourself?? Isn’t that like serving yourself up to the crown prince???
 
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This bodes so bad, I kept getting lost on what was haopening cause of the pisspoor paneling. I honestly thought at the start FMC had a dizzy spell and the prince for inexplicable reason sword cut a leaf.
 
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That random monster parade could not have been more contrived; it was like a scene out of the Bachelorette.
 

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