Makoto with his damaged from burns hands can't really draw succfully now, unless he actually gets better with story and hire help he cannot progress so it's sort of his punishment.
I don't like how Makoto raping and abuse of Mayuko got forgotten by her if she really regained her memories, he pretended to be Mayuko husband, fucked her whenever he likes and even physically abused her back when he got full of himself after making the one-shot.
Mayuko end up with her rapist Makoto, Takagi albeit feeling guilty for letting Mayuko being raped by Ayahiko, had no repercussions for what she did or tried to atoning by actually helping her during the time Mayuko was let alone to recover after regaining her memories.
Was hoping she would take the time off from work and stay at her side, since she was her only "friend".
Overall it's a story, could leave out Makoto raping Mayuko in the state of denial, he shouldn't really be taking the same genes of his father as much Ayahiko did, that made his character unredeemable in my eyes.
It's kind of wish fulfillment story overall, Makoto got what he want, while Mayuko is stuck with her abuser once again, although he loves her so there's that.
7/10 because unreasonable ending.
Thanks for scanlation till the very end.