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WILL THAT COWARDLY KING OF LIFERIA DISPATCH HIS TROOPS FROM THE CAPITAL!
This is a question, it should end with a question mark.
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HOW LONG DO YOU THINK HAS PASSED SINCE
THE DEMON LORD'S ARMY ATTACKED ZIRCON TOWER PREVIOUSLY
This needs definitely more proofreading, and a question mark.
