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It just started lil broCould have done so much more with the premise but instead we get mid
valid, gonna fix itIs it me, or some phrasings are kinda weird?
Like, on page 9, Halta begins talking with "If that's the case,..." - if what's the case? Or, on page 12, Shion asks Halta "are you seeing this guy?", but from the context it looks like she was asking if Halta actually haven't been chosen yet, instead.
were far enough in to tell what it will focus onIt just started lil bro