Isekai Shoukan Oji-san no Juumusou Life ~Sabage Suki Salaryman wa Kaisha Owari ni Isekai e Chokki suru~ - Vol. 3 Ch. 22

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To Oliver not @Beridam
 
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ok so feesback
proofread your mtl more (was mostly fine but some bubbles were scuffed), if some basic kana isn't tled by whatever you are using you can just look it up yourself (the untled bubbles are just the goblins saying gieee or keee as screeches) also use another font
pretty shameless to ask for donos with this one ngl, especially since you aren't saying if you are even going to tl more
 
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ok so feesback
proofread your mtl more (was mostly fine but some bubbles were scuffed), if some basic kana isn't tled by whatever you are using you can just look it up yourself (the untled bubbles are just the goblins saying gieee or keee as screeches) also use another font
pretty shameless to ask for donos with this one ngl, especially since you aren't saying if you are even going to tl more
Thank you for your feedback!
I´m aware of the screeches, but somehow I didn´t like it to put the translation in the bubble. Maybe I should put them as a side note?
As for the font, you´re right about that. While writing it I thought it was ok and the person who did the proofreading didn´t say anything either so I let it be. Do you have a recommendation wich font I could use?
Since this is the first time I did this I appreciate any feedback, so thanks again.
And about, if I´m planning to continue. Yes, I plan to do so, but since I can only do it beside work I can´t guarantee a specific frequency.
 
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150k yen for that?... id buy it.
translates to roughly $950. Which is about right for a tricked out version of the FN Mk46/M249 SAW. "Cheap" for that type with any reliability is about $250, without a box mag. price tag's a bit on the high end, but it's probably a mostly or all metal build that would be worth the price and weigh as much as the real deal.
 

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