Yes, that is very nice of you to decensor things. HOWEVER would you please kindly do better proofreading side-by-side with Luxy's version? You're getting a lot of things wrong and typos are abundant. Maybe do a joint venture with someone just so you have another pair of eyes to proofread?
I mean you're a great typesetter and I'm guessing a very good redrawer too, so you're only missing the proof dept.