Nice start, thanks for the release.
Other than some small stuff (like you said in a comment above, just stuff missed by sloppy double checking) the script here is pretty good for someone who, I assume, just got started scanlating recently.
If you wouldn't mind, I'd like to lend some tips for editing and give you a better version of the font you're using (yours seems to have a dotted i), if you're up to talk about that, do you have discord?