Kaiten no Albus - Ch. 20 - Be Yourself

[Kushikime]

Thanks for the chapters !!

 

[MondSemmel]

Reiterating my comment from c18:

If Zealark remembers everything from each loop until the moment of his death, just like Albus, then he's genuinely dangerous for Albus in a way nothing else is. After all, if your memories regress, it doesn't particularly matter if you're the one casting the regression spell or not. Keeping his memories would make Zealark almost as much of a regressor as Albus, and thus a threat on even footing.

All that said, Zealark is correct that Albus needs "stimulation". Because regressors have two main weaknesses (as the webnovel Infinite Regressor constantly emphasizes) which pose a genuine danger to them: other regressors, and their own mental health.

 

[Yuyu_yusha]

You half right Albus. Documentary with David Attenborough. Now that's the best documentary. The pinnacle of documentary.

 

[MondSemmel]

Thanks for the chapter!

Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26

• p14 you just haven't seen it yet -> you just haven't seen them yet
• p17 I don't need your twists -> I don't need your plot twists
• p17 Those presumptions -> [looks like there's an excess space in-between]

 

[SilverSour]

Zarlack just feels like he's more problems than he's worth, if I'm MC I kill him every run

But ngnl he would be a great assets if mc could bring him in. Like no need to give explanation on every run, and he could also provide useful information. If he end up become the enemy, that would give mc huge problem as well after all

 

[Yosu26]

Thanks for the chapter!

Typos & edit suggestions: @Yosu26

• p14 you just haven't seen it yet -> you just haven't seen them yet
• p17 I don't need your twists -> I don't need your plot twists
• p17 Those presumptions -> [looks like there's an excess space in-between]

Thank you for taking the time to write these suggestions!
Oh, and p17 is because I used justify for the text alignment.