okayPlease, even if you use some 'AI' to translate and don't have proper raws, try to use a graphical editor (Paint.net, for example, is free-of-charge) for typesetting and brightening.
It took me less than a minute to make the 1st page brighter with 'Recolor', and I bet that the middle part of the megabubble on the 3rd frame wouldn't cover the right part of the bubble, if you used any graphical editor to typeset:
Thank you ! I translate the manga in my free time, I will try to correct the mistakes! Unfortunately, I do not have the ending of this mangaThank you for the raw and translation. Please reach out to the r/manga reddit to see if anyone is willing to help proofread, clean up, or even translate with you. Every scanlation group has a start somewhere and it wouldn't hurt to try.
Otherwise, don't take any bad criticism. You revived this when no one else would.