a oneshot about the author's barely disguised fetish
I think this could have benefited from at least one extra page showing him actually being rude to the employees. If he was actually a nice guy from the start I kinda feel bad for him (a little).
I can see the potential for comedy, but if this was supposed to be a romcom oneshot, there's barely anything here for the rom part; with only the last page making his heart skip a beat for her one act of kindness.