Kawaigariya no Hisho to Ore - Oneshot

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a oneshot about the author's barely disguised fetish

I think this could have benefited from at least one extra page showing him actually being rude to the employees. If he was actually a nice guy from the start I kinda feel bad for him (a little).

I can see the potential for comedy, but if this was supposed to be a romcom oneshot, there's barely anything here for the rom part; with only the last page making his heart skip a beat for her one act of kindness.
 

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