Keikenchi Chochiku de Nonbiri Shoushin Ryokou ~Yuusha to Koibito ni Tsuihou sareta Senshi no Mujikaku zama~ - Vol. 2 Ch. 9

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I'm going to be that weird guy and point out that on slide/page 8 you can faintly see a camel toe. OK I will see myself out.
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I have a few issues with the story telling, mainly two points

1. The MC talks about the hole in his heart. I get it, she was the woman you planned to marry. But he was instantly rewarded with 280 levels and damn near limitless skills/jobs that are just unlocking w/e he needs them. Not to mention he can exp boost anyone he wants.
2. The whole Demon eye thing, this one is more preference but instead of her being a slave the MC's OG love interest should have actually betrayed him and put him in a situation where we can experience the journey and come to enjoy his overloaded stats.
 
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I have a few issues with the story telling, mainly two points

1. The MC talks about the hole in his heart. I get it, she was the woman you planned to marry. But he was instantly rewarded with 280 levels and damn near limitless skills/jobs that are just unlocking w/e he needs them. Not to mention he can exp boost anyone he wants.
2. The whole Demon eye thing, this one is more preference but instead of her being a slave the MC's OG love interest should have actually betrayed him and put him in a situation where we can experience the journey and come to enjoy his overloaded stats.
Yeah, if those girls come back to the mc party to me i just done with this
 
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I have a few issues with the story telling, mainly two points

1. The MC talks about the hole in his heart. I get it, she was the woman you planned to marry. But he was instantly rewarded with 280 levels and damn near limitless skills/jobs that are just unlocking w/e he needs them. Not to mention he can exp boost anyone he wants.
2. The whole Demon eye thing, this one is more preference but instead of her being a slave the MC's OG love interest should have actually betrayed him and put him in a situation where we can experience the journey and come to enjoy his overloaded stats.
The thing with the hole in his heart is an emotional issue leveling up isn't gonna fix that.
 
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It's a cliché, but true, friends and deepening of relationships are what can cure a broken heart! Running away It's a short term solution
 
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misogyny levels in this series some of the highest I’ve ever seen ngl
The hero is kind of horrible even by standards of "expelled from the party" manga. I've seen mind controlling "heroes" who are better to their women.
The noble society is ...realistically bad. Which is quite bad. Makes me appreciate living in the 21st century.
 
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They stated that the hero’s party was S level and our MC is level B now that he’s solo. So how the hell is the hero still trying to make a “debut”? The bitch is already the leader of an S class party. He should be famous already.

And that assault of a woman in town, at the site of vanished labyrinth should have been enough for an inquiry at least.
 
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They stated that the hero’s party was S level and our MC is level B now that he’s solo. So how the hell is the hero still trying to make a “debut”? The bitch is already the leader of an S class party. He should be famous already.

And that assault of a woman in town, at the site of vanished labyrinth should have been enough for an inquiry at least.
The author has had such "Inconvenient Truths" as well as logistical holes occur in past chapters. Basically, the author forces the reader to ignore them as the plot is forcibly advanced into the next scenario. By ignoring the problems, the author does not allow such problems with either behavioral logic or plot continuity issues to exist in the story. It's pretty annoying to me too.

The author seems to be trying to build up sympathy for the three girls in the original party. We see it with the former S-class "hero" using skills like "Demon Eye" as if he were secretly possessed by heart demons. So I am getting annoyed because it looks like the author is going to force the MC to meet with the three women once again, and of course he will forgive them. And then there will be some forced plot emotional event, the MC's heart will be healed enough to accept Kaede as his new love.
 
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And then there will be some forced plot emotional event, the MC's heart will be healed enough to accept Kaede as his new love.
Well I consider most of the authors, who lean on the slave trope, to be degenerate anyway. I’m just boredom vacation
 
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I have a few issues with the story telling, mainly two points

1. The MC talks about the hole in his heart. I get it, she was the woman you planned to marry. But he was instantly rewarded with 280 levels and damn near limitless skills/jobs that are just unlocking w/e he needs them. Not to mention he can exp boost anyone he wants.
2. The whole Demon eye thing, this one is more preference but instead of her being a slave the MC's OG love interest should have actually betrayed him and put him in a situation where we can experience the journey and come to enjoy his overloaded stats.
Never had a heart break before? heart break can't be mend in a short time. Speaking from my humble experience.
 
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Those breasts were so destructive they made his dick literally explode in the next frame.
 

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