Kikanshita S-Kyuu Boukensha no Quest Seikatsu - Ch. 2

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MC brought a greatsword on his back just like that... so they didn't have firearm and sword possession control law anymore. Must've been the sign of times.
 
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Ive seen this story regression formhla for a while now and this one is subpar.....

The pacing here is all over the place. First chapter speedruns his motivation and being an outcast due to his class. Its just 2 things but its still very vague due to bad writing

2nd chapter is a joke. He goes to see his sis still alive, goes training, becomes hunter, goes hunting and shows off IN 1 CHAPTEE
 

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