Keep in mind this is my First scanlation later I'll do a new and better translation(maybe after making the Spanish translation). I will do my best to made a better translation in the other 2 stories(Satan Claus and Demon Express Delivery)
Here's a typesetting guide: http://sensescans.com/index.php?topic=3260.0
At a bare minimum, please center your text and use a better font (you can google search "scanlation fonts" for a bunch of choices, wildwords is a really basic one)
I'd suggest to commission the English translations to someone else.
There are way too many errors and sometimes it's hard to tell what the characters are supposed to say.