"If you like what we do and want to support us"
Look I'm sorry, I know you are not actually getting paid for this, but this TL has issues that are beyond just grammar/wording mistakes at this point. The dialogue straight-up does not make sense in some parts.
If you are asking for support then I think it isn't too much to ask for extremely basic quality checking, because again, I'm sorry but even having AI fix mistakes would be an improvement here.