Kimi wa Shinenai Hai Kaburi no Majo - Vol. 1 Ch. 1.2 - My Great Master

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Poor Lord trying to say “Good Day” and scaring the absolute s*** out of the poor subordinate.
 
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4-koma wannabe, in that the fantasy setting is just a segway for romcom and has no intrinsic value. Now that wouldn't be a problem in a 4-koma but it is inexcusable in a manga that's trying to build and maintain a compelling story, as whatever is built is devalued by the mangaka's lack of respect for the setting.
 
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Yes you must specify she is a virgin, and wouldn't save another person like you to keep all the self insert losers happy
 
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@Kaiju Although I don't like how you worded it you're right. They could have just left it as "lived alone for a hundred years" and let the readers make their own assumptions. I'm ashamed to admit that I often self-insert, but even I feel its very unnatural when authors have to stress so hard that this girl is a virgin.
 
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Her staying a virgin for a hundred years was very key information. It explains how she managed to become a wizard after all
 
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He said 'Good Day, to you mate. I'm just going to go down the chippy to get some fish and chips ya?'
 

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