Kitai no Akujo, Sandome no Jinsei de "Musai Munou" wo Tanoshimu - Ch. 1

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One of the things I dislike the most is characters who hide their abilities and let people walk all over them. The only time I don't mind is when they handle it with intellect like the MC did here. However, that gets exhausting after a while especially if them hiding their power puts them in danger. I like emotional maturity but not being the bigger person just to suffer constant abuse. TLDR. I hope she puts them in their place sooner rather than later
 
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Utterly unreadable. I have read many cases of MTL translated with minimum edit, that still somehow readable compared to this. "My father" instead of simply "father" when both daughters is within the same family (page 30), "the second prince father" just write the king (page 32). I get it that you are not native japanese, didn't ask you to get that far, but at least try to re-read what you translating then correct the wording mistake with whatever MTL you are using
 
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Utterly unreadable. I have read many cases of MTL translated with minimum edit, that still somehow readable compared to this. "My father" instead of simply "father" when both daughters is within the same family (page 30), "the second prince father" just write the king (page 32). I get it that you are not native japanese, didn't ask you to get that far, but at least try to re-read what you translating then correct the wording mistake with whatever MTL you are using
Dude, don't expect much from art lapsa. This is the same group that has a hobby changing "I'm" into "I^m" and switching up text balloon.
 
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Translation is off in several spots. Made it a tad confusing, specially in the later half of the chapter, the last few pages you could tell they didn't proofread at all. Idk if it's lack of proofreading or that they just aren't fluent enough in English but this was barely passable.
 
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Regarding the TL, this is pretty bad. Not unreadable, but painful.
Mistaken pronouns (a very common MTL mistake), inconsistent character names (the MC's name in her first life in particular, also very common with MTL), ambiguous adjectives...

Regarding the story, I hope she won't let herself be victimized for the sake of her "useless" status.
Because I can't stand people wanting a quiet life while pretending that being bullied works towards that goal. This is plain insanity.
So far, she's walking the thin line pretty well except for letting the prince bruise her wrist. I feel like this should cross a line.
 
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At this point, with modern knowledge, why not self exile? Why bother letting others trample you? What are you waiting for? Self exile to another continent/country and starting anew as a commoner might be a better idea than continuing this farce of incompetence...
 
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I hope someone retranslates this series. Art lapsa’s known for having inhumanly low translation standards.
 

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