Kizumono no Hanayome - Ch. 4

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man why do the 'villain' types in these have to be so gross
 
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You should at least try to have consistent terminology.

Byakurenji, White Lotus Temple, Byakuren Temple, some in the same chapter, it's embarassing.

Don't get me wrong, there are definitely worse translations than this. Aside from that issue, it's mostly okay.

You're asking people to read the rest of the chapters on your site, and even pay for the more recent ones? This amateur-level translation isn't worth that in my opinion.

To be fair, it is not entirely my place to say this. Maybe I'm too spoiled. I've ultimately enjoyed this for free, and I don't donate to fan translation in general (this could change once I graduate and get disposable income, I'm not sure, but even then it would have to be better than this) so I wouldn't have paid for anything anyway. (Well, I have probably paid over 100€ to j-novel.club in total over the years, but that's professional-level translation where I can trust that I won't be confused by a new term that actually means something the author already mentioned before.)
 
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“I only mistreated her because you kept me from knowing how hot she was!”
Fucking gross, dude. ML could ACTUALLY be treating her as nothing more than his blood bag, and it would still probably be less toxic.
 
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Actual manchild shit. Jackson 5's I want you back is actually tamer than this SWINGING pendulum of emotions. First he threw her away in the most disturbing way possible, and now needed her so bad he turns off his brain and goes "I'll save her."
 

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