Fed-Kun's army
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- Apr 23, 2024
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I liked the concepts in this one, but execution wise, it felt choppy with Shinji traveling from A to B to C. Perhaps that’s due to it being a singular chapter. It was great seeing Ilulu and Take plan a date, but upsetting to see Shinji become forgotten about. He’s got potential in his story, and it’s only a matter of time before we see it unfold.