Konna ni Kawaii Otose-kun ga Onna no Ko no Hazu ga nai - Vol. 2 Ch. 23

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So the blackmailing meant nothing in the end.
Right? As if the mangaka said, "I'm having a hard time writing around this one trope people don't like. I know, let's see if I can make everyone forget about it, entirely."
 
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@lemon-dono typos
Pg 1: "reassuring" and "Tachibana" are split across lines so should be hyphenated (also, hyphens should occur at syllable boundaries, i.e. "Ta-chi-ba-na" is all acceptable but not "Tachiban-a")
Pg 2a: So we should adverise -> So we should advertise
Pg 2b: "revamp" doesn't need to be hyphenated
Pg 3a: It is my movements? -> Is it my movements?
Pg 3b: Place the hyphen after "cross" instead of before "dressing"
Pg 5a: welcome the cust-omer -> welcome the cus-tomer
Pg 5b: "no good" doesn't need to be hyphenated
Pg 6: Change the comma after "back" to a full stop
Pg 7: A shop with Super cute -> A shop with super cute
 
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@lemon-dono typos
Pg 1: "reassuring" and "Tachibana" are split across lines so should be hyphenated (also, hyphens should occur at syllable boundaries, i.e. "Ta-chi-ba-na" is all acceptable but not "Tachiban-a")
Pg 2a: So we should adverise -> So we should advertise
Pg 2b: "revamp" doesn't need to be hyphenated
Pg 3a: It is my movements? -> Is it my movements?
Pg 3b: Place the hyphen after "cross" instead of before "dressing"
Pg 5a: welcome the cust-omer -> welcome the cus-tomer
Pg 5b: "no good" doesn't need to be hyphenated
Pg 6: Change the comma after "back" to a full stop
Pg 7: A shop with Super cute -> A shop with super cute
fix-ed
 

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