@lemon-dono typos
Pg 1: "reassuring" and "Tachibana" are split across lines so should be hyphenated (also, hyphens should occur at syllable boundaries, i.e. "Ta-chi-ba-na" is all acceptable but not "Tachiban-a")
Pg 2a: So we should
adverise -> So we should
advertise
Pg 2b: "revamp" doesn't need to be hyphenated
Pg 3a:
It is my movements? ->
Is it my movements?
Pg 3b: Place the hyphen after "cross" instead of before "dressing"
Pg 5a: welcome the
cust-omer -> welcome the
cus-tomer
Pg 5b: "no good" doesn't need to be hyphenated
Pg 6: Change the comma after "back" to a full stop
Pg 7: A shop with
Super cute -> A shop with
super cute