Kono Yo wa Tatakau Kachi ga Aru - Oneshot
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I have fun reading this.
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I had been waiting for this one and holy shit it was AWESOME ty for translating !!
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Aghh!! Why is it always the oneshots that bring out the best of our emotions. Such an amazing story.
Thanks for the translation.
Thanks for the translation.
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Hellow, Ienaiwa. This comment is long, but I don't think you did a bad job at all.
Image 7, "embarrassing" is misspelled.
Image 8, it should be like "that last bit of money" or "those last bits of money" to match.
Image 18, it should be something like "why isn't the document I asked you fornot done yet." (Or "why is the document I asked you for not done yet.")
Image 25, it should be "babies who like to command..." to match.
Image 26, "trashes" should just be "trash."
Image 31, "absence" is misspelled.
Image 35, not a mistake, but remarks are usually "made" rather than "said."
Image 36, it should be "people who speak" and "what senpai thinks of this" to match.
"If you've come then tell me" would be something like "if you're here, then say so" to be natural.
Something like "I said it because I just wanted to hear what senpai thinks" is also more natural.
Image 37, "usually" is misspelled.
I don't see the connection between ヤケクソ and "out of pocket." Something more like "if you throw a tantrum just because things aren't going well" or make a fuss/blow up/go wild/have a fit/flip out/freak out or a ton of other phrases probably make more sense.
Image 38, I think "goodbye, everyone in this trash dump" is more like what she says.
Image 42, it should be at least "saying such a thing" but that line and the next would be more natural and old lady-sounding as like "my goodness, saying something like that" and "that's not something you should say so happily" or maybe "while smiling" if you want to be closer to the literal Japanese.
It should be "slender arms," but the two left side panels are also kind of full of Japanese-isms and not natural English.
Image 43, 買わせないとかわいがるぞ should probably be something like "if you don't let me buy this, I'll just have to have some fun with you instead."
"Messed up" is kind wrong if you're going with prim granny-talk and should be something like "all wrong" or "just dreadful."
Image 44, "go pick it up" should just be "answer it" to be natural and the entire bubble would be like "let me take his call real quick."
Image 49, the first bubble should be "said you didn't have enoughmoney" and the last should be "the total is X" or "totalling X" or maybe "total: X" with a colon.
Image 50, "trade me this piercing for this correction tape" or "let's trade this piercing and correction tape" to be more natural.
The middle panel should be more like "you're pretty mouthy for a woman who doesn't think for herself and just does whatever you're told," then "it's not like you can do anything on your own without me," and finally ending the last with "stupid bitch."
Image 7, "embarrassing" is misspelled.
Image 8, it should be like "that last bit of money" or "those last bits of money" to match.
Image 18, it should be something like "why isn't the document I asked you for
Image 25, it should be "babies who like to command..." to match.
Image 26, "trashes" should just be "trash."
Image 31, "absence" is misspelled.
Image 35, not a mistake, but remarks are usually "made" rather than "said."
Image 36, it should be "people who speak" and "what senpai thinks of this" to match.
"If you've come then tell me" would be something like "if you're here, then say so" to be natural.
Something like "I said it because I just wanted to hear what senpai thinks" is also more natural.
Image 37, "usually" is misspelled.
I don't see the connection between ヤケクソ and "out of pocket." Something more like "if you throw a tantrum just because things aren't going well" or make a fuss/blow up/go wild/have a fit/flip out/freak out or a ton of other phrases probably make more sense.
Image 38, I think "goodbye, everyone in this trash dump" is more like what she says.
Image 42, it should be at least "saying such a thing" but that line and the next would be more natural and old lady-sounding as like "my goodness, saying something like that" and "that's not something you should say so happily" or maybe "while smiling" if you want to be closer to the literal Japanese.
It should be "slender arms," but the two left side panels are also kind of full of Japanese-isms and not natural English.
Image 43, 買わせないとかわいがるぞ should probably be something like "if you don't let me buy this, I'll just have to have some fun with you instead."
"Messed up" is kind wrong if you're going with prim granny-talk and should be something like "all wrong" or "just dreadful."
Image 44, "go pick it up" should just be "answer it" to be natural and the entire bubble would be like "let me take his call real quick."
Image 49, the first bubble should be "said you didn't have enough
Image 50, "trade me this piercing for this correction tape" or "let's trade this piercing and correction tape" to be more natural.
The middle panel should be more like "you're pretty mouthy for a woman who doesn't think for herself and just does whatever you're told," then "it's not like you can do anything on your own without me," and finally ending the last with "stupid bitch."
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Man I wish that asshole is just a fictional stereotype thing but unfortunately those things exist in real life, sad to think about.
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That seggs scene was hot, wish we got more of that. I think she's pregnant from it, they weren't using protection
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wtf happened at the end there
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WIth the amount of stress she had, her ovulation and hormones are probably more than fucked
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It was a moment of truth for her. Was she gonna go out swinging (no pun intended), or was she she gonna let people abuse her till she died? It looks like she's grasping life by the face and forcing it to see her live. The reason she's getting her life back on track might be a bit tragic, but she's not going to leave life without getting back at the people who have abused her. I hope she find more reasons to live, other than on spite. That's not good at all.
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Right!! I'm so worried about her future but also so glad she's taken that first step. Shame this is a oneshot because GOD I'd love to know where it goes from here. They really managed to make you care in only 60 pages
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Honestly, I actually have hopes this could be serialized in the future. That page of the wheelchair underwater really tells me there could be a lot more of her past that can be explored.
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Yeah I wouldn't be surprised, I reallly really hope it does haha
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My only compliant is a fucking thunderbolt didn't suddenly hit that cheating piece of shit "boyfriend" of her right after threatening her with suicide despite knowing full well she lost her brother to it but I guess it would be an unreasonable Deus Ex Machina
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ah it actually looks like according to the authors twitter it is getting serialized and has already had its first two chapters published (assuming twitter translate isnt lying to me i dont speak japanese) !! hope someone picks it up
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Oh yeah!
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It change from all these story where the girl change only after she die or because a random dude save her.
It's intresting but quite messy, it'll be great if it were serialized.
It's intresting but quite messy, it'll be great if it were serialized.
