Koroshiya Idol Matosaki Ayame - Oneshot

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Pretty good, a bit different from this author's usual work, but they've got pretty good range! I will say, I wish it were a little easier for the reader to tell at a glance which one of them was in control, but I may just be dense and overlooking an obvious tell.
 
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I wonder what's "Fake Noble Lady vs Real Noble Lady" is about
 
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This was fun, I am unsure how you could transition into a whole story but their dynamic was enjoyable. Maybe a reverse situation, assassin ghost and idol main body, might work a bit better. It wouldn't be the most original but I could see some fun shenanigans coming from it being serialized.
 
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That's the most adorable evil spirit I've ever seen.
I think this would make a great action-comedy movie if the plot was fleshed out a little more.
 

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