Kouchuugun Shikan Boukensha ni Naru - Vol. 2 Ch. 7 - Talas Village

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lol such awful writing. Why would the cores only be mentioned now? There was plenty of time before. Especially with how quickly she got over the initial catastrophe. So many plot holes it’s kind of saddening. But what can you expect from stories like this.
plotholes? would you rather have the story literally overload you with everything from the start? because thats one of the reasons why people are now disliking the recent chapters of hxh,
you fuckers really can't be satisfied in anyway, if the story includes literally every spot and inconsistency, it will just be called preachy and too wordy.
i fucking swear
 
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I guess Cleria is doing ok as his (weak) sidekick for now. But I'm still disappointed there isn't really anything she excels in that he could rely on her for, as for now it's just reading the native writing system, which he'll surely learn soon.

It'd be great if he could at some point build a gun for her, even if it's an inferior one that's not exactly the type he carries. Something like a gun that uses magic particles and principles (i.e. a magic tool-type gun, maybe something that uses magic stones as ammo/power source) sounds like good innovation, incorporating both magic and technology as a result of him learning from magic.

But I may be expecting too much from this story.
 

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