page 2 and 3 : "snore" ? i guess they should be "burp" instead .
page 8 : "kodan cosmetics" is probably based on kodansha , the publisher of this manga kui tan : https://www.mangaupdates.com/series.html?id=16845
page 13 and 14 : in the back-ground , there is a guy with the jacket "STUFF" ? bad japanese engrish , lol , it should be "STAFF" instead .
instead of using miso soup , the criminal should just scratch her face directly .