Kuro no Senki: Isekai Teni Shita Boku ga Saikyou na no wa Bed no Ue dake no You desu - Vol. 1 Ch. 2.3

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The first translation had atrocious proofreading and I assume it was removed because of that. The first 10 pages or so seem to have been proofread as the translation is far better, but the second half is still atrocious.
 
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@Uinseannphoqueit & @Lasoren yes it was reuploaded. the first draft read like your having a stroke. but like @Tsumi said the first half was fixed but some slipped through in the second half. still good work on the translation. but if you need to take more time to fix things then do so we can wait as readers.
 
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Investigation
just come to the suspect office and punch a dude in the face, threaten to burn his family alive.
 
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I think it's more appropriate "I came as soon as possible"
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what is the easiest way to crop images without downloading them first?
 
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imagine the blunder if the accountant he tried to bluff know nothing as is usually the case.
 
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"i need help investigating the marquis. its a sensitive matter and we have no proof"
MC: "k gimme like 2 minutes"
 
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Ok I can safely say that this version is an improvement from the previous one you guys had a week ago but there are still some errors that were spotted. Like throughout the chapter the marquis' name is spelled differently & Tilla's name got misspelled a couple times like on page 13, 15 & 16 & on page 14 the word "knew" is misspelled. Regardless thank you for the translations & I do hope people aren't too critical on you guys since you do pump out a lot of manga people enjoy.
 
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My god his name is Sitter Window? Why not reverse it and call himself Window Sitter? 🤣
 
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Still some issues, but overall a vast improvement over the last version. Keep up the good work.
 
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The hell was this? Like i was expecting a sort of clever plot to expose the fat ass but he just barge in an took the proof that were conveniently on the same room, and bad guy just so happens to come in at the same time...i mean its good that they kept it short and simple, but it was sort of disappointing
 
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holy hell, I don't usually complain about typos or poor sentence structure, i'm fairly tolerant of that/I correct it so fast that I never even notice it, but this... the page linked below took me actual time to parse what the hell was said. If you are english second language, have someone who is native give it a once over, if you are competent/proficient with english, translate it, typeset, and sit on it for 3 or so days and re read it, by then you usually forget the way you intended the words to come out and you read them for what they are, god knows when I write things that matter I have to do this otherwise I would "fill in the blanks" as it were to the point the sentence is intelligible.

other then that, keep going, this is interesting to me.
 

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