Kusobitch na Gal Ane o Wakaraseru Hanashi - Ch. 1 - Sense of Distance

[Genzerum]

(pls go easy on me bcuz i am dense as steel)
can someone please explain why the other one of the author's "gal sister" is so disliked?

If you know what to do with this number, here is the reason - 492902. Or you can just look at author's profile here on mangadex, cause it has been put on website also.

 

[jagfanbb]

Oh? We doing this again? Can't wait for the wars to rage in the comments again 😂

 

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(pls go easy on me bcuz i am dense as steel)
can someone please explain why the other one of the author's "gal sister" is so disliked?

Short version: Untagged NTR behind a paywall.

Long version: The author wrote the most incoherent pile of shit she could, in the most brutally efficient way possible. This is supposed to be an "I can fix her" manga- and it was. The issue is that she hid crucial plot elements behind a paywall. The public got a rushed-but-serviceable story, while anyone that paid got an incoherent mess where the girl's only consistent character trait is that she's reluctant to have sex until someone touches her; at which point a switch flips and she goes FULL AHEGAO...


On top of the fact that the author went out of her way to paint the brother as being interested in the girl as she's literally using one of the three guys in the room as a meat dildo to prepare herself for a gangbang,

 

[SUPER7X]

Us

The author knows that we shit on this story a lot.

According to what?

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

According to what?

Her angry Twitter screeds.

 

[shin66]

Hope I'm not jinxing it but this will be an absolute dumpster fire of depravity and frustrating shit

Thanks for the translation

 

[biologist]

She will do tagged ntr manga properly this time right?

 

[Eighty-six]

The public got a rushed-but-serviceable story, while anyone that paid got an incoherent mess where the girl's only consistent character trait is that she's reluctant to have sex until someone touches her; at which point a switch flips and she goes FULL AHEGAO...

Y'know, when you put it that way, you make it sound like specifically the people who paid for the Fanbox or otherwise sought out the porn were being punished for doing so.

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

Y'know, when you put it that way, you make it sound like specifically the people who paid for the Fanbox or otherwise sought out the porn were being punished for doing so.

"Man this romance is so heartwarming. I should support the author and see what sh- OH MY FUCKING GOD". Everyone that didn't was spared it. They lived in blissful ignorance until the author, bless her retarded heart, decided to let us know exactly what was happening in the Fanbox in Chapter 4.

 

[Eighty-six]

"Man this romance is so heartwarming[...]"

MC on chapter 1 at release (to anyone savvy about manga tropes and also wasn't a fetus):

 

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MC on chapter 1 at release (to anyone savvy about manga tropes and also wasn't a fetus):

You mean FMC? Because that ended up being wrong. You know this already.

 

[Eighty-six]

You mean FMC? Because that ended up being wrong. You know this already.

That's why I specified "at release". I don't think there was a singular existence who thought that he wasn't declaring that he'd give his sister the "damn brat needs correction 💢💢💢" until the sharp turn by chapter 2's release (and that's whether one understands it as an intentional subversion of expectations or a borderline forced change).

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

That's why I specified "at release". I don't think there was a singular existence who thought that he wasn't declaring that he'd give his sister the "damn brat needs correction 💢💢💢" until the sharp turn by chapter 2's release (and that's whether one understands it as an intentional subversion of expectations or a borderline forced change).

I got confused, since chapter 1 is day 0. My mind turned it into "Chapter 0", which left the party as "Chapter 1"

 

[Kushikime]

Thanks for the chapter

 

[NickieTheFool]

Someone let me know when it gets to the chapter where he shoves his cock down her throat thanks

 

[UnLunDun]

Author for sure is a nice guy

 

[Azaghal]

Not looking forward to this considering what the preserialization was

I'm gonna skip this and maybe check on a random chapter much later to see how shit it has become

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

Not looking forward to this considering what the preserialization was

I'm gonna skip this and maybe check on a random chapter much later to see how shit it has become

So far the author avoided setting up NTR. So even if everything else plays out exactly the same, panel for panel, the biggest slap to the face is gone for now. Now as for all the other slaps...

 

[DaBoySwag77]

Popular artist and promising premise (For a lack of better words)

Also, blame Tonari no Young Jump.
A lot of its stuff is standard fantasy / romcom / normal stuff, like Chigau Miyahara Omae Janai, Ane no Tomodachi, Kyūseishu Messiah, Ponta ga Hito ni Narimashita, Kiite kuremasu yo ne? Senpai etc etc

But then, they like to go a little silly with the fetishes with stuff like Akebi's Sailor Uniform, Kō Iu no ga Ii etc etc. Or go extra with stuff like DOOOOM (Not the game lol), Tsurenai Hodo Aokute Azatoi Kurai ni Akai (A perfect manga to have a "Why Boner!?" reaction), Sacchan to Ken-chan wa Kyō mo Itteru etc etc

And sometimes, just sometimes, they go in extreme directions like "Let's see how FAR we can get as a mainstream publisher" with stuff like Maria no Danzai for the gore / torture, and Kiyota-san wa Yogosaretai!? for straight up super horny Yuri porn lmao.

That's why I'm saying that with this publisher, nothing is set in stone. Next 2 chapter of this will be critical.

Thanks for the info. Knowing who the publisher is kinda hints where it could go. No point in pointles theories as we will see in the future chapters if its rework or 1-to-1 of the pixiv stuff.

She didn't piss off just overseas fans, there were quite a decent number of japanese fans mad too. If she wants to double down on the rapey/NTR then she can be my guest, I just hope she doesn't go crying on her social media about how her work was axed or how fans disliked the path the story went to.

Also, how she was trying to deceive people by saying that there was no NTR in the pre serialization (when that was exactly the case) just because of the backslash she received was really annoying. Egaki Numa clearly is a coward.

Facts. But honestly speaking: I dont think she will care. Im more interested how popular or not it will be when the NTR chapters come. My gutt feeling is that in the first chapters it will be only off-screen as to test the waters and see how much hate she can get. If not so bad, we will see probably the pixiv stuff even in the manga, as Slyss already mentioned, with such a publisher this is a given.

(pls go easy on me bcuz i am dense as steel)
can someone please explain why the other one of the author's "gal sister" is so disliked?

• Author wants to make Brother x Gal Sis ero story (gone sexuall!)
• Author makes a short comic about Brother molesting (ups I mean correcting) Gal Sis - but she likes it
• Pixiv says their paypal lords dont like stuff like incest, so everything incest must go or your account is done.
• Author panics, reworks some parts of it - They step siblings now!
• "Well... Its alright I guess? Kinda disappointed but not that bad after all" was the common reaction here

HOWER:

• Author (female), for some reason unknown, decides to spice things up by adding NTR
• Sis gets in the short span of 5 chaps, a bunch of NTR scenes with other guys, even to a point the Brother will made fun of. Basically typical NTR dialog about him being a wimp or something while fucking her.
• People not liking it, people getting obviously angry
• Author be like: "Uwaaaaht? People got mad? Its not NTR lol. Because I say so."
• People from west and japanse bros shit post in her twitter feat, adding the right tags on her Pixiv (NTR tag), she dosent like it as "it dosent protray the right THEME(yeah thats what she said) for this "story") - However, for some strange reason NTR tag is applied on the fanbox stuff.
• She gets heat for several days, she make some statement she gets harraset, thats its not her fault, its not REAL NTR etc etc
• Gets some support, but people not buying the BS excuse
• Author doubles down with NTR on the fanbox, since the majority only saw the "SFW" version
• Months later no update, only to hear it got manga adaptation
• You are here.

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So far the author avoided setting up NTR. So even if everything else plays out exactly the same, panel for panel, the biggest slap to the face is gone for now. Now as for all the other slaps...

Huh? The NTR happns just after she leaves the home. Where she goes to some douche house for some gangbang. The second one is where she joins one of them for a BJ. Only then she somehow grow some brain and stops doing it. Anyway.

I see you madmen really decided to translate this shit...bruh... I remember we talked much back then when the shit hit the fan. I guess the ranking starts dropping once we have the unpleasent stuff showed again...you know, like in the original haha. I respect for your effort man, but perhaps not giving this pile of poo the time of its day might do wonders, and not translating it. But its just my opinnion.

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

Huh? The NTR happns just after she leaves the home. Where she goes to some douche house for some gangbang. The second one is where she joins one of them for a BJ. Only then she somehow grow some brain and stops doing it. Anyway.

I know English isn't your first language so let me explain this in a way a foreigner can understand:

We're talking about this chapter.

MC loves her like a sister.

If MC is going to love her like a woman, that happens later.

If she does the gangbang when MC only loves her like a sister, it's not NTR.

Telling me (The guy who translated the other version) what happens in that other version is a waste of time.

I see you madmen really decided to translate this shit...bruh... I remember we talked much back then when the shit hit the fan. I guess the ranking starts dropping once we have the unpleasent stuff showed again...you know, like in the original haha. I respect for your effort man, but perhaps not giving this pile of poo the time of its day might do wonders, and not translating it. But its just my opinnion.

The author has an editor, NTR was averted for now, and the tagline at the end of the chapter implies that maybe the sister is just misunderstood. Like, maybe in this version, she's just moody, and the family is assuming the worst. We saw her with a tag stuck to her pants. I bet you assumed she stole the pants, just like I did. Maybe the author put that scene in, and then it'll turn out she bought them and forgot to take the tag off, for example. Imagine dying your hair, getting some piercings, and suddenly even your own "brother" is calling you a "Dirty slut", even though you're a virgin or something.

Pixiv says their paypal lords dont like stuff like incest, so everything incest must go or your account is done.

Incest and "non-consensual acts".