I think you uploaded the wrong chapter...
Edit: And switched to the right one.
That large pattern acts like camo on the dress. Makes it a bit hard to see how it actually looks. It also clashes against the black top piece.
That's such a soft looking skirt on page 4. It's a good look.
Left on page 5 looks great. The right one looks a bit stiff.
Yeah, don't plan too much before you've got everyone on board.
"Why are you stressing about it like it's your own bistro?"
Nothing wrong with taking things seriously. It is wrong to put people down people like that, though.
Also nothing wrong with those shirts. FMC has the right spirit. The ball of embarrassment next to her does not.