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ghostkun Dex-chan lover Joined Jan 18, 2018 Messages 2,424 Jun 7, 2026 #2 Quite beefy as one shots go. Nice idea with the wither plus fire combo at the end.
Hicleric Dex-chan lover Joined Jan 9, 2023 Messages 4,439 Jun 7, 2026 #3 Fun read, but please don't ever spell cheese with a z unless you want to make it feel like a cheap fake substitute I wouldn't mind seeing this turned into a full series tbh. The tiny glimpse of worldbuilding already shows a lot of potential
Fun read, but please don't ever spell cheese with a z unless you want to make it feel like a cheap fake substitute I wouldn't mind seeing this turned into a full series tbh. The tiny glimpse of worldbuilding already shows a lot of potential
DereAkuta Group Leader Joined Jan 31, 2023 Messages 77 Jun 7, 2026 #4 Hicleric said: Fun read, but please don't ever spell cheese with a z unless you want to make it feel like a cheap fake substitute I wouldn't mind seeing this turned into a full series tbh. The tiny glimpse of worldbuilding already shows a lot of potential Click to expand... Oh sh, lmao. That's why something didn't feel right when seeing it, lmao. I got too many mistakes in this chapter, it's like I'm a new scanlator, lmao.
Hicleric said: Fun read, but please don't ever spell cheese with a z unless you want to make it feel like a cheap fake substitute I wouldn't mind seeing this turned into a full series tbh. The tiny glimpse of worldbuilding already shows a lot of potential Click to expand... Oh sh, lmao. That's why something didn't feel right when seeing it, lmao. I got too many mistakes in this chapter, it's like I'm a new scanlator, lmao.