Pretty well done. Definitely a long entry that feels long, but for the purpose of telling a complete contemplative story the length feels appropriate. Art generally works too; I don't have any specific comments on that aside to note that it's technically good but I didn't feel it elevating the material much. Likewise paneling which flowed smoothly, although I should note the flashback transitions generally felt jarring except for the bit with the father.
The art is really something. Other than that, it's a very.... youthful story. That's all I could think of. It's good, it's got a pleasant vibe, but boy does it make me feel old.
It's not really a scanlation if it's an official publication....
And yes, this was originally posted at the beginning of July and the comments on M+ are tied to that date. Not sure if this was reupped on their end or if the scraper bot screwed things up again.
Okay, but I didn't say that it were. I can see that a link is now posted; I could not remember whether what was previously posted had been a link or a scanlation.