Lads, the leading in this typesetting is way too high. Please look into appropriate leading in future endeavors.
Also please get a proofreader, there is obvious mistakes that an english speaker should be able to pick up, like in the first page
>She's really is such a kind person
The apostrophe makes it 'she is really is such a kind person' so you need to remove an 'is' somewhere, this is just basic english conventions that you really need to look for.