Love Angel and the Corporate Slave - Oneshot

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Story's kinda cute, (the female lead is cute too), but the male lead is not very different from the generic and typically spineless male lead you see often in Heisei-era romcoms. As a oneshot this is fine, but I'm not sure I'm gonna enjoy a longer series featuring a protagonist with his seemingly weak personality.

If we ignore the ending where he chickened out and pushed her off of him, this plot seems very much like the story part of a typical H manga oneshot... or if you removed the second half (the porn part) of a typical 20+ page vanilla H manga oneshot, this is what would be left. Surprisingly, neither author nor artist seems to have dabbled in that kind of thing before.
 
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Im game, seen too many manga where the angel is stuck up or the losing heroine so i like her. Also if this gets serialized inb4
Loli angel senpai whos easily flustered
Rival succubus that jumps straight into bdsm
Best friend of mc who thinks one of the protagsl is abuseing the other
Rival female coworker who has a very conservative view of love and marriage
Cat or fox shinto god who just wants food but unconsciously does lewd shit
 
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Story's kinda cute, (the female lead is cute too), but the male lead is not very different from the generic and typically spineless male lead you see often in Heisei-era romcoms. As a oneshot this is fine, but I'm not sure I'm gonna enjoy a longer series featuring a protagonist with his seemingly weak personality.

If we ignore the ending where he chickened out and pushed her off of him, this plot seems very much like the story part of a typical H manga oneshot... or if you removed the second half (the porn part) of a typical 20+ page vanilla H manga oneshot, this is what would be left. Surprisingly, neither author nor artist seems to have dabbled in that kind of thing before.
Ya I agree. If a girl straight out ask a dude if they want to have sex and they act like that then it makes no sense for them to get together. This is realistically the end of romantic tension.

Either bone or have an actual conversation about how while you like them you don't want to have sex yet.
 
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If he was a Chinese protagonist, he'd bed her then and there
 
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Story's kinda cute, (the female lead is cute too), but the male lead is not very different from the generic and typically spineless male lead you see often in Heisei-era romcoms. As a oneshot this is fine, but I'm not sure I'm gonna enjoy a longer series featuring a protagonist with his seemingly weak personality.

If we ignore the ending where he chickened out and pushed her off of him, this plot seems very much like the story part of a typical H manga oneshot... or if you removed the second half (the porn part) of a typical 20+ page vanilla H manga oneshot, this is what would be left. Surprisingly, neither author nor artist seems to have dabbled in that kind of thing before.
It helps some people to self insert and keeps the story from moving :haa:
 

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