Who is this for? Who asked for this? The... I hesitate to call it "Comedy" in this story conflicts with both the sex and the original source material to the point that the tone is constantly teetering around like a drunk man on a tightrope.
Who is this for? Who asked for this? The... I hesitate to call it "Comedy" in this story conflicts with both the sex and the original source material to the point that the tone is constantly teetering around like a drunk man on a tightrope.