Magokoro Scramble! What Lies in Your Heart? - Ch. 9 - Exchanging Letters

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Bro 2 months? I feel like the author doesn’t really understand how long 2 whole entire months are for a highschool student. Removing summer that’s like a third of your entire school year, that’s way too long to avoid talking even if you are exchanging letters.
 
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Feels a bit like an early warning (from axe-kun) plot pivot. Author is still trying to find a coherent voice.
 
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I do not understand the point of hypno girl or the time scale we are working with here. The chaos of the manga is bleeding into writing chaos and not in a good way.
 
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The fact that they didn't speak for two months, and that he has still been associating with this mind-controlling girl the entire time tells me everything I need to know about this author's ability to write a sensible character. Warping someone's mind and taking away their agency to hurt them isn't a prank, it's a completely vile action.
 

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