Thank you for your feedback. I am aware about the quality of the sentences are questionable, and i would like to apologize about them as English isn't my first language, and not all the sentences were rephrased. I am also aware of the fact of the previous translations were drawn over were pretty noticeable and some of the text bubbles were cut out as I used a square box instead of an oval shape. I will do better on the next chapter and use appropriate elements for the next chapter.