Majo no Ending Note - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - Visiting The Hero's Grave

[someonelurking]

i have a feeling that she might not be able to complete all of the things but we will see

 

[Doedoel]

Kinda hopeful how this manga's gonna go

 

[VooXoo]

I was kinda wondering too why the hero's body is still perfectly fine after 20 years
Hopefully, the next chapter explains it

Hopefully it will at least try.

For the evil witch they should make clear how being killed doesn't count to trigger the curse.

Of course they can use the Claymore trick of the author introducing a more powerful monster at the start that the MC thought was a evolution of the normal ones and then revealing it was just a normal monster with a little bit more intelligence and not anything close to the evolution (retcon from the mangaka back then, regretting skewing the enemy power level)

 

[Miserys_End]

Mmhhhh
Not very satisfated.
If a witch dies with a regret she will leave something terrible behind, they killed a witch and nothing happened, it seems like the curse only activates following the "natural" life of a witch ending, should have probably said that in a extra page before closing the chapter.
I presume they will make clear why heroes have magic allergy later.
Why the hero body didn't rot, dude looks like he just died.
Nina not doing anything when the blade was taken away, the person seemed to act on instinct but still put on gloves, the little sister excuse wasn't too bad, but doesn't work because is impossible the hero wouldn't have told her he had another sister in all their journey, there is a limit to Nina insecurities, I can imagine the doppelganger witch was tryingto find a way to break in the church and eat the body, but why use a dead person face? Or guards as escort? I can barely make it pass how she knew the sister face but it likely being on some booklet about the hero biography (weird the MC didn't knew).
Plot have several holes from the get go.

The plot is nothing but holes. Like how did he survive infancy if just touching someone with magic burned him? The first paradox is that he was somehow immune to his own mother's magic. His next experience should have been the hands of the healer who delivered him, and I doubt they would have done more then jist wash their hands before catching the kid.

So even before we get to witch's unfulfilled desires cause Calamities and natural disasters, the main character himself is just one great big contradiction.

 

[Yoshida_Ch]

How do you pronounce mc name? Is it Dyed or Dy-d?

Overall, a interesting manga.