Marriage of Convenience - Vol. 1 Ch. 20
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It's been 20 chapters and at least 5 of them had a line akin to "she had no idea what was coming".
I think the author isn't skilled enough to build tension and believable conflict, so he has to force it this way. Problem is: if you do it every other chapter it starts falling really fucking flat.
Also someone before pointed out the erotica tag being woefully inadequate - and I think the tag's here because it was previously called smut - and this is Smut in its purest definition: trashy content for young-adult women.
I think the author isn't skilled enough to build tension and believable conflict, so he has to force it this way. Problem is: if you do it every other chapter it starts falling really fucking flat.
Also someone before pointed out the erotica tag being woefully inadequate - and I think the tag's here because it was previously called smut - and this is Smut in its purest definition: trashy content for young-adult women.
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Well, we got a look of what's going on inside his head and why he's been hesitant all this time though it was obvious and I can't say I blame him, he doesn't know how to interact with her properly and it's both of their fault, a relationship is not a one way street, if that Jacob or whatever tried anything and she blushes and flirts with him, i'll really hate her and she has cheated on him in the past, but I shouldn't judge her so soon, so we'll see. 😶
