Aye, translation seemed good to me. Only noticed two grammar mistakes and they were minorThis is really good quality for your first time, thanks for the translation
Seems to be a typo, "if not for him ilness," instead of "if not for his ilness,"Page 29, panel 4
Hmm..."Then, may I ask one question?"
Sure, but don't get your panties in a bunch just because you don't have the proper violence to offer."I encourage violence."
Why, though?"Stop boding over ominous remarks!"