So that was... fun, if not quite as bad as 13.2. Pain train slows down again for chapter 15, FWIW.
No notes, though I spent a while um-ing and ah-ing over page 7; I don't know if that whole thing was really meant to be phrased like a haiku or something but I just thought about some of the Xeets I've read from the mangaka, how she really seemed to feel pretty strongly about this whole work as a... tribute? to the real-life person, and I just tried to make it as srs bsnss as I could with my limited skills. Anyway, the meaning should be broadly correct, either way (e.g. if you Google the phrase Yamada uses in the last panel you get a lot of discussion threads, blog posts etc. about "I struggle to work out why I'm even alive" and so on), so fingers crossed.