Minna Watashi no Hara no Naka

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"Everyone Inside my Stomach"?

An eye-catchingly alarming title, I guess XD

Alas, this first chapter at least seems to be a bit in that always-somewhat-upsetting "Dating a bunch of different guys while pining for this one girl that's your true love" branch of gay literature.
 
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So... in chapter 3,
are those incoming or outgoing messages on Nagisa's LINE? Is she contacting her ex or is her ex contacting her? (I'm presuming it's her ex that was a divorcee and had a kid her age when they were in high school...)
 
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Really sad this got dropped. I feel like this story could be really interesting and sweet but having to stop in the middle where all there is is angst and no catharsis is just disappointing. No shade to the TLs (thanks for your work!) just sad :shamihuh:
 
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The problem with this manga is it's too focusing on the aaangst part.

Until now (chap.7) the ratio of topics is 80% they talk about men, marriage, how they should look, how people see them, them acting like the others want them to, their place in a patriarchal society, their mixed feelings for themselves, grooming, their sexuality (not too much)... Really only good vibes (the only thing left here is sexual violence but maybe we get it in the next chapters who knows). 10%/15% is about cooking and them enjoying eating. And the others % is them talking about everyday stuffs. I know it's a slow burn but, come on, we have so little to nothing to eat here.

Even the prince like character, that should be more gay, is a fraud. She is not acknowledging her past relationships with girls because it was an all girls highschool phase, where she plays a substitute for a boyfriend and she too wanted a boyfriend at that time and even now she's looking for one.

Really, the two MC are too straight. We sense some kind of curiosity for each other but not enough to get stick and wanted to be in another type of relationship.

After finishing a chapter, I'm just frustrated as fuck. Nothing happened, the good parts that should lift up the mood didn't do anything and I'm left with a bad mood.
 

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