Ah dang it, didn't catch those, thanks!Thanks for the TL!
Just a note regarding page 16: in the whole discussion Yae doesn't specify the gender of her friend (well translated by using they/them), but you left some references to male
Center-right: They said that they didn't feel motivated enough to cook just for himself, so he cut some corners.
Left panel: I thought "I will definitely make him
Not sure if it's Yae who messes up or you inadvertently translated as male since we know she's talking about Zen