Mizu Zokusei no Mahoutsukai - Ch. 13

[Baraqiel]

From the bubble it seems Ryo was the one to cast "Boiling Rain". But why not "Freezing Rain"? Weird.

 

[Kefrayba]

The way the mangaka did the panel is a bit confusing. But not the to the level of some bad ones that I have seen.

 

[Metasepia]

i know right, that was a 180 out of nowhere

also, im still waiting for my 5 bucks for chapter 12 and now chapter 13 lol (obviously kidding)

I got you fam what's your paypal

 

[BigPoppaEffy]

Noice. Need to consume more before the anime comes out in July lol

 

[okasakisan]

The way the mangaka did the panel is a bit confusing. But not the to the level of some bad ones that I have seen.

trust me, i know, sometimes it makes me think that the pages are in the wrong order or something

 

[CraniumAmbiguity]

WN reader here. The pacing was quite slow and there were a lot of erroneous details. Like misc world building and day to day filler. I think they cut down on that massively to make the pacing better for a manga, but it just sorta comes out feeling rushed. Like reading a slideshow of a manga.

Like we went from: "books are expensive. How can I ever afford it?" > "Lets check on the payment" >Picture of bag of money > "Thank you for your purchase."
This was literally 4 panels.
For reference, they cut out the part where he

Spoiler: Minor world building filler (might be explained in future ch?)

went back to guild, got sit down in private room, and paid with surprise pikachu face before going back later to purchase the books. It was also explained to him how the stones were being sold and what he received was only the initial sales. He was only paid for the initial sale of like 5 or less stones. The guild is spacing out the sales and location to avoid crashing the market price and hide the seller.

edit:
I don't remember if it was this manga or not, but I do believe there is a system of taking notes. There is a limit of what you can be loaned at a time and an entry fee. The books can not be taken from the premise, but you can take notes/copy it's contents for personal use. The MC wanted a personal copy so he could properly read, study, and practice it's contents. Although it might cost more, it was simply more convenient to outright purchase the book than to spend his time transcribing his own copy while paying an entrance fee for every day he spent there. And it is not like he is lacking in money anymore.

 

[vodspod]

why doesn't he ask why she needs to be hostile towards him?

 

[okasakisan]

WN reader here. The pacing was quite slow and there were a lot of erroneous details. Like misc world building and day to day filler. I think they cut down on that massively to make the pacing better for a manga, but it just sorta comes out feeling rushed. Like reading a slideshow of a manga.

Like we went from: "books are expensive. How can I ever afford it?" > "Lets check on the payment" >Picture of bag of money > "Thank you for your purchase."
This was literally 4 panels.
For reference, they cut out the part where he

Spoiler: Minor world building filler (might be explained in future ch?)

went back to guild, got sit down in private room, and paid with surprise pikachu face before going back later to purchase the books. It was also explained to him how the stones were being sold and what he received was only the initial sales. He was only paid for the initial sale of like 5 or less stones. The guild is spacing out the sales and location to avoid crashing the market price and hide the seller.

edit:
I don't remember if it was this manga or not, but I do believe there is a system of taking notes. There is a limit of what you can be loaned at a time and an entry fee. The books can not be taken from the premise, but you can take notes/copy it's contents for personal use. The MC wanted a personal copy so he could properly read, study, and practice it's contents. Although it might cost more, it was simply more convenient to outright purchase the book than to spend his time transcribing his own copy while paying an entrance fee for every day he spent there. And it is not like he is lacking in money anymore.

Yea, they do cut a lot from the WN, everyone who has read the WN says the same thing, feels so rushed that sometimes it feels like its missing panels or even pages. Sadly there is nothing we can do about that.

But to be fair the main focus of this chapter was the encounter and fight with Leonor, and they did explain how they were gonna sell the magic stones to not crash the market and they were gonna have some of the money in 3-4 days back in chapter 8, and since it has been around 9 days since he got to the city it makes sense that he just went and got the money.

 

[dextersTomato]

Until Ryo slap her butt, they are fated to meet for that to happen

 

[noname120]

Smash

 

[okasakisan]

Thank for the chapter.

page 21:
“you must of got it” should be either “must have“ or “must’ve“ (“must’ve” is the the contraction of “must have” which often sounds like “must of”).
“Guess there is not other choice” should be “guess there is no other choice“, “guess there’s no other choice”, “guess there's not another choice“, or “guess there is not another choice“.
”is time” should be “it is time” or “it’s time“.

page 33:
”maybe I should had” should be “should have“

Also, unrelated to the grammar…
I can fix her

fixed the errors you pointed out, thanks =]

 

[nuttyknight89]

monsters and some of the backgrounds are obviously CGI as well.

I’ve been noticing that more and more lately for when the artist has either a really complex monster or a giant hoard of monsters in the chapter.

 

[nuttyknight89]

fixed the errors you pointed out, thanks =]

No problem. Glad to help.

 

[Zeemigoo]

That’s what you get for staring directly into an eclipse

 

[Gletscher]

...everyone who has read the WN says the same thing...

I never read it and can feel it just by reading the manga. As I mentioned in another chapter, it's like those movies made from books that you can only fully understand when you alredy read the books, like: "oh, now it's this part, and noe it's that other part...", but if you didn't read the books it's still kinda enjoyable, except there's a lot of stuff that either doesn't make sence or simply is obviously skipping something. This manga gives this same feeling, so I'm glad for the bits and pieces of the LN you guys put here in the coment section to complement the story.