Mofumofu to Isekai Slow Life wo Mezashimasu! - Vol. 7 Ch. 32 - Orst's Experiment

[MangaDex]

 

[___rica]

Everyone,since I just found out that it worked when I tried to upload this chapter, so I hope you forgive me for still using that font.. Next chapter I'm going to change it. I'm so very sorry and I just found out that this website has a comment section after all these years reading here.

 

[Miserys_End]

Everyone,since I just found out that it worked when I tried to upload this chapter, so I hope you forgive me for still using that font.. Next chapter I'm going to change it. I'm so very sorry and I just found out that this website has a comment section after all these years reading here.

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This needs a lot of help. Thank you for your efforts, but please spend more time working on sentence structure, making sure the words are in their proper order and that there isn't missing or extra words.

Think I got to page 8 before my brain stroked out and stopped putting consecutive word together. I would offer to help, but my brain freezes up reading MTL word salad. So wouldn't be of much use.

 

[dethduck]

Time for a classic.

 

[codebracker]

I appreciate the effort but my head hurts from reading that

 

[ismaelh]

People saying this can't be understood are overreacting. There were 2 dialogue bubbles that confused me at most. I think the biggest issue is grammar fails, as they said above. sometimes the verb is missing, stuff like that. There are probably tools for checking grammar and spelling mistakes, running each sentence through one of those might help.

But this was a 56 page chapter and I appreciate the effort and the translation. I cant read japanese of course, but the sentences and the context fit.

 

[ARealCoolGuy]

When did The Fallen Ones start appearing? I'm wondering if The Fallen Ones are a consequence of the actions taken by the elven nation trying to lower the overly abundant magic that was causing the stampedes?

 

[albirew]

@__rica if you wanna give it a try, there's comic-translate that "automatically" clean for you (it also does translation and text insertion, butt integrated free google translate is somehow shittier than free google translate from google website...)

 

[kingdudman]

Thanks for the chapter

 

[Gletscher]

Thanks for the chapter.

So... why the cloth on the head after all?

 

[Miserys_End]

People saying this can't be understood are overreacting. There were 2 dialogue bubbles that confused me at most. I think the biggest issue is grammar fails, as they said above. sometimes the verb is missing, stuff like that. There are probably tools for checking grammar and spelling mistakes, running each sentence through one of those might help.

But this was a 56 page chapter and I appreciate the effort and the translation. I cant read japanese of course, but the sentences and the context fit.

I know I have minor reading comprehension issues. Dyslexia can be a right pain in the ass. But rarely does it take me three or four passes just to understand a single sentence in a text bubble. Maybe if they were boxes that contains walls of text, but single sentences should never cause the audience difficulties.

This chapter contained many such examples. Some had words missing/added, while others flipped the placement of verbs and nouns. So I feel completely justified in saying the chapter was mostly MTL word salad.

 

[BalrogDeMorgoth]

Thanks for the chapter

 

[Boring-Ash]

He made butter? How have they been cooking all this time without something as simple as butter?

 

[Elzariel]

I'm seconding the "this needs a lot of work".
I appreciate the effort of 50+ pages translated, but this is near unreadable at points. Many bubbles make no sense or need several minutes of pondering to figure out. Its an even mix of not enough words, too many words, the wrong words, the words in the wrong order.
Either you need a proofreader or more time spent on checking grammar.