Mujintou de Elf to Kyoudou Seikatsu - Vol. 4 Ch. 17

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Thank you for the chapter! Page 6 and especially page 7 really needed the nipples showing during such an important moment. Honestly one of my biggest likes with this series are the fanservice panels, they just feel so necessary, especially now that the story has taken on a more serious tone.
 
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Yeah, honestly one of my biggest issues with this series are the forced fanservice panels, they just feel so unnecessary, especially now that the story has taken on a more serious tone.
Well if she's not wearing a bra.... it gets cold in caves. 🤷‍♂️
 
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That was my first thought as well. There's no way that fucker would apologize to anyone, let alone Kento who he despises with a passion.
 
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how dumb are these people? the guy obviously is not able to put his personal shit aside and do the job. he couldn't be trusted to do anything at all around them. He would be more useful tied up and carried like a sack of potatoes if they absolutely had to take him
 
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I'm glad that this is back, but the art style does not convey the actions properly. The insistence on keeping the viewpoint close to the characters' faces all the time makes it difficult to understand where they are in the environment and in relation to each other, and action scenes have no connection moving from one koma to the following one.

This is likely a trick to disguise the mangaka's lack of ability to draw backgrounds (I know I suck at them too), which may work in a slice of life story, but when it comes to action pieces where spatial awareness helps the audience keep track of the action, this approach just makes things confusing.

Basically, this manga feels rushed and slow at the same time because the action is happening too fast while looking like nothing is happening at the same time.
 
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"You made a fatal mistake shapeshifter — Touji's too much of a jackass to apologize."
Huh, that explains a lot.
Have to say this series is kind of difficult to read due to how poorly the artist has realized it. It feels very jumpy and lacking attention to detail.
Yep. Like another guy said in an earlier chapter: every panel feels as if it is a camera that is too close to the subject it is trying to record.
 
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These last 2 chapters have been kinda shit, everything happening a lighting speed, cliche developments included.

I'm evil, now I have a change of heart, now I'm good, now I sacrifice myself, now I'm a crazy bitch....
 

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